I am Samuel, a Year 7 student attending Sacred Heart College. I am part of a trial period in which they are trying out students to be blog commenters, which means it is my first experience with this sort of position. However, I did complete the Summer Learning Journey as a student in previous years.
Roald Dahl is one of my favourite authors, my favourite being J.K Rowling, and my favourite book from him is " The Magic Finger."
I like the presentation and layout of your blog post, however, don't forget to attribute the images you use. Attributing images is the act of acknowledging the source or where you found the image or piece of information. This is vital and you can be permitted to show the attribution in college assessments and in later life.
The grammar and punctuation is good, but maybe it would pay to recheck and re-read your writing, just to make sure everything is in place and everything makes sense. Apart from that, well done, Wuatai.
Good Evening Wuatai,
ReplyDeleteI am Samuel, a Year 7 student attending Sacred Heart College. I am part of a trial period in which they are trying out students to be blog commenters, which means it is my first experience with this sort of position. However, I did complete the Summer Learning Journey as a student in previous years.
Roald Dahl is one of my favourite authors, my favourite being J.K Rowling, and my favourite book from him is " The Magic Finger."
I like the presentation and layout of your blog post, however, don't forget to attribute the images you use. Attributing images is the act of acknowledging the source or where you found the image or piece of information. This is vital and you can be permitted to show the attribution in college assessments and in later life.
The grammar and punctuation is good, but maybe it would pay to recheck and re-read your writing, just to make sure everything is in place and everything makes sense. Apart from that, well done, Wuatai.
Kind Regards,
Samuel
thank you Samuel comment and I will recheck my work
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