I am a Year 7 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teachers are Mrs Tofa and Mrs Raj.
A great deal
Between Maori and British
Signed in the year 1840
At a place called Waitangi
The treaty danced
But only the British enjoyed
The Maori did not understand
Because the versions
Were not hand in hand
By Wuatai
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Hey Wuatai , this is actually mouth dropping and amazing. I loved how you rhymed and put your sentences together correctly. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Wautai, I really enjoyed your post about treaty of Waitangi keep up the really good work:)
ReplyDeleteHi Wuatai , this is a very interesting poem about Treaty of Waitang. I liked how you rhymed all those words and put it into a poem. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHi Wuatai this is a really excellent poem and it tells the reader so many details while rhyming all the sentences.
ReplyDeleteHi Wuatai this is soane
ReplyDeleteYour poem has so much detail about the treaty of waitangi and it tells much more with your rhyhming
Hey Wuatai,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a wonderful poem. I like how you put so much effort into making this. Keep it up:)
-Maria
Hi Wuatai Its me Victoria.F,
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really interesting and wonderful. I really like how you put so much effort into this work. Keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Wuatai
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem I can tell you really put some thought into this poem. Keep up the Amazing work.
Mason
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